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379 No. 379
for the fuckin' record, NON-RELATED PIC!!!!!!

now on with the story, ya fucks -.-

Back to the flashing lights and the crowd, who were all dressed in red t-shirts and devil horns, looked on in the spectacle… of which happened to be a bare-naked brown-skin woman in her 20’s with black hair laid in the middle of what seemed to be a football field and was pumping herself with a bicycle pump via anal; half the crowd began to chant “Pop it. Pop it. Pop it,” in a slow, bellowing voice, while all the while, the woman’s belly got bigger with each pump; shortly after, some of the guys in the seats started betting how long it would be before she popped, “I give it another 2-6 minutes; poor girl, she coulda been a great athlete.”
All the while the crowd was cheering, the woman kept pumping more air into herself; a few more pumps later, she reached the point where she looked 9 months pregnant. She crazily looked around at the crowd of people, who started to look like demons to her, as they stared and cheered. She had stared long enough until her whole world twisted and turned like an old fashion flashback transition thing that appears in 1960’s show or something.
Within seconds, her world changed from the Colosseum scenery to her being a gurney on her to ER with a huge belly, which kept growing and growing.
The doctors rush her down the hallway and in through double door into the ER, while the woman laid with a hospital gown on her, watching her belly grow ever-so-much into a giant exercise ball; kept stretching so big ‘til she became too heavy for the gurney.
“Get her on the table.”
“I’ll try, but she’s probably amassed a ton more weight since we rolled her in here.”
“Just do it!”
The doctors and some of the nurses lift up hard as if they trying to be a 400lb fat person onto a bed; their arms shaking from the sheer weight bearing down on them as they tried lifting the woman onto the table. The woman’s gargantuan girth kept inflating taking up about all the space of the table as it lay under her midsection.
Her world changes once more, and she is now seen in the doggy style position with a super flexible arm playing around with her ass; the arm belonging to the character “Mega boy” from the movie “Zoom”. He works in a couple of fingers and pulls them out and pushes them in, then works in his whole hand with little to no effort and continues to pound down her anus hole like a fisting lessons porno film, then he takes his hand and shoves it deeper until past wrist and half way up the lower arm. From there, something weird happens and his whole arm expands to the size of an elephant’s foot and keeps going, all the while stretching the girl’s anus to oblivion and stretching her abdominal area to a ridiculous size as she screamed. She pops back into reality and realizes that no one is around to hear her scream and rush in to save her from death by a little thing a person I know called “AnusAir”. Her stomach expanding beyond its limits and showed signs of stretch marks; the girl is once again zones out and finds her self inside a barn laying in the same position as the one woman, Brenda, did in the movie slither, with a bunch of cops and other townsfolk standing to her left near the barn door.
“The little fuckers are tearing me apaaaaart,” she yells out in agony as back in reality, more stretch marks appear, getting even redder than before. With that, her belly began to shake as if an earthquake was happening insider; back in her dream, her character gets bigger and even redder stretch marks as whatever was inside her started to make her body swell to even greater length.
Back in reality, the entire outline of her small and large intestines began to show as well as the occasional veins coming in colors of green, red, and blue. She gained a bit of consciousness and tries to reach for the plug of the aquarium pump she now found sticking into her ass, but her huge belly interfered. She tried reaching for the hose to the pump, and her belly interfered again all the while, beginning to resemble twice the size of the huge belly on the woman in the move “Three year deliver” or whatever it’s called, but without any clothes covering it.
Later, an invisible force puts her hand together over top of her head as if tying her to the wall of some dungeon.
Her dream world, or should I say nightmare world, changed for the worse once more; she found herself changed to a walls with her monstrously large belly sticking out, stretched ¾ of the way to the opposite wall, where a pin stuck out.
Back in reality, she was just on the verge of bursting as her belly reached the height of the top of her bunk beds as well stretched so more under she could hardly see over it towards the TV anymore. Sweat began running down her face as she grew and grew and grew.
Her world changed into her sitting on a queen sized or king sized mattress in her clothes, eating some of strange jelly beans, literally swallowing them whole as she were making a vore video for the Eka’s portal website; she kept eating until she had only three left, then hesitated before scarfing down remaining three.
“All that has made me thirsty.” As she reached for half gallon water jug, her world transitions to her standing on a mock set of Oprah knows “Okrah” as the host herself stand right next to gargantuan girth.
“I’m here with Jessica, who just nearly finished a hundred gallons of tomato juice. How are you feeling, Jessica?”
Jessica stresses to lean over to Okrah and grab the mic, shaking as she brought it to her lips, “A lil bloated, but fine.” She pulls to the microphone away from her lips and whispers to Okrah, “Help me.”
“Haha, you’re such a kidder, Jessica. How about you finish up the last bit of tomato juice?
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>> No. 380
>>379

“She slowly brings the hose connected to the tank up to her lips and suck from it, the tomato juice slowly drained from the container and made its way up the hose and in through Jessica’s mouth to her stomach; her huge girth started to shake, thus making the ground shake as well; Okrah desperately tries to get out of the way. Instead of sitting in the front row, she fled the building laughing like a maniac, while Jessica convulses like after falling onto her back; looking as if she having a seizure, her world changed into a movie theater while her yet again gorging gut growing slightly bigger with each pump.
Paramedics arrived on the scene, one of them puts a stethoscope to her, trying to hear a heartbeat; her brings the instrument down onto her belly and hears the slight sound like that which you would hear when tearing a paper sack.
“What do you hear?” the other paramedic asked.
The one with the stethoscope to her stomach slowly pulled away with his mouth wide open in shock.
“Damn it, what do you hear?”
He looks up at the other guy as a huge explosion bursts out of the woman’s gut like a nuclear bomb detonating, while back in reality, the woman’s belly goes out with bang, literally throwing viscera, blood and organs onto the walls as the entire house shook.
Days after the incident, cops arrive after one of the deceased’s neighbors reported an explosion, which sounds like someone knocking down a building with dynamite, the cops go door-to-door asking if anyone else heard a disturbance, they all say the same “Yes”.
Finally, the cops knock on the door of the girl’s house and no one answered.
“Maybe they’re not home…”
The other cop agrees and they both get into their cars and drive back to the station, not knowing what went on in that house; the story remains untold until some guy came by and slapped an eviction notice on the front door, and way down the road when the construction crew tore the roof of the house off with a wrecking ball. The roof crumbles and gives away, showing a blood covered room.
The workers stopped and went inside to investigate.
It wasn’t until way later that the cops arrive on the scene with an ambulance; they make the workers leave and begin investigating the alleged crime scene; found one aquarium pump laying near a torn open abdominal cavity, which looked as if an alien crawled out, with the hose running from it to the girls ass crack.
“Another victim of… when getting high…. Goes wrong.”
“That’s why, it shouldn’t be legal…” the other cops mentions.


The end
>> No. 381
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381
This is actually pretty terrible.
>> No. 382
0/10 review.

But thank you for trying.
>> No. 384
>>382
well then you do better (smart ass)
i'm not going for making it as good as "the dark knight" or any 3 star or 5 star movie, ok.
it's just something i wrote after i tried inflating when i was high.
>> No. 386
>>384
I'd give you some constructive criticism, but it would take a while to type, and it's glaringly obvious that you aren't that serious about writing. So I'm going to ask you to please stay away from the medium from now on.
>> No. 387
>>386
motherfucka, i AM SERIOUS!
you should see some of my fanfics i'm writing.
this was just something i wrote after i was high.
cuz when i'm inflating when i'm high, i get intense huluccinations and i somewhat travel to a different world while my body stays behind (obviously, that's what happens when you're high, duh) and i hardly feel anything when the air is rushing through my colon and into my small intestine, up my stomach and out my throat.
so, unlike how it is in my story, i didn't burst or anything; just had the air travel through my digestive system backwards and come out in a burp.
reason why i had a belly bursting ending is because i have a sick fetish for that sorta thing.
>> No. 388
>>387
Do the fanfics you wrote describe the action at hand by comparing it to scenes from obscure movies?
>> No. 389
I lawled.

Would read again.
>> No. 390
>>389
there's a second one of these in a series of (obviously 2) NOT INFLATION, THOUGH!!!!
no.... ssssspank you, very much...
the other one's about anal fisting; a skinny guy and a BBW, and the skinny male is being fisted.
>> No. 408
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408
I made the picture relevant for you. Only took 936 hours in paint. You are welcome
>> No. 409
>>408
why not just go back under your bridge you troll? -.-
*made a picture relevant for you* BITCH, PLEASE!!!
>> No. 411
>>409
Ouch. That sure taught me a lesson.

You want serious responses? Post a serious attempt at literature. People try and tell you that it is seriously lacking and you jump all over their shit, so I made you a pretty picture instead. To be honest, my picture is relevant to your story because it has about as much skill and attention to detail. Either learn to take some criticism to better your craft or stop begging people to read your story.
>> No. 412
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412
I should probably get in on this too.
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