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In the late 21st century nano-technology had largely been abandoned due to several failed experiments that led to near catastrophic events. As my colleges abandoned the field I found myself alone toiling long into the night so sure i could cure most the ailments of humanity. At the time of my first great discovery I was not aware of the impact it would have on myself or the human race. It was a combination of chemistry, biology and computer science; the research ate away 60 years of my life. It had consumed me and destroyed any chance I had at happiness up until that first successful batch. As I grew older and closer to death's door I found my research and experimentation had changed direction from one of betterment to self fulfillment; a curse I passed along to my future children and provincials.

My arm lay under the injection system, this devise would not make a sick woman healthy or let a young child survive the trial and tribulations of life; it did what i wanted. With a thick hiss the large needle plunged into my arm and my veins filled with fire. In two weeks I awoke to the world in a different body, it was the body of a strong fit twenty five year old man, a body i had never benefited from. My eyes had never seen this clearly without correction, I had never been this tall, i had never been so strong in my entire life. I laughed and jumped about as I had not done in many years. As the weeks went by my experiments on myself continued at an accelerated rate. I no longer needed to sleep and never tired, when i felt like it I pushed forward for days. My body was clay and I was the hands that shaped it. In time I learned I could use the nano-machines inside my body as a personal computation and design system, from that point on i was never bound to a location again.

For the next hundred years of so I lived a dream giving in to my impulses. At times I took what I wanted when I wanted, other times i was a shining knight of civilization, leaping from roof tops to save people from muggers and criminals. I acted out of wander lust and base emotions, I took loves of all genders, creeds and stations. Filled all curiosities, tasted every flavor and traveled all roads. It was a glorious time, a time before alienation, but also before love; humanity shared in my joys, and as a species we had finally solved most the great problems of the last three hundred years. While my advances have never been repeated to the best of my knowledge humanity has made progress in different ways with different technologies. Colonization of other astral bodies had been proposed by the unified governments and all could feel humanity was on the edge of some great experiment.

It was a risk and for the rest of humanity a one way trip, I believed if successful I would no doubt live to return home. The astral gate for a return trip would take decades to build, but what were decades to a man who had lived nearly two centuries. I immediately began to construct a life that would be have the desired traits for colonists. I set up in one of the less scrupulous countries and began to build a life. I attended, graduated from and began teaching at one of the countries moderate universities. In my spare time I would return to experimentation on the more vulgar students, i wished to create a system for my nano-machines to travel outside of my body and effect the world around me. I started small and repainted some walls through two years of class lectures and moved up to trying some on mammals. I would slowly over a semester alter the body make-up of students. It started with a few inches here and there, one girl got a little taller while a boy got a little shorter.

I cured heart problems decades before they would show up, but made a man go bald by 23, one girl i cured ovarian cancer before it had a chance to spread but also added two hundred lbs of fat and flesh to her frame over four years, and one 4'9'' girl I turned into a 6'11'' giant while curing her stutter.

Secure in my material and career life i began to search for a start to a family. I was curious how nano-machines would effect the growth and development of a fetus and the mind of a child. I had specifically designed the necessary nanos to be non upgradable without an outside station. I didn't want the mind of child going crazy with it's own clay. I had now only to find a wife and wait. She walked into my life, and into my face as I sat reading one of the last local news prints available.

"Oh excuse me, I'm so sorry" she said and pouted.
Looking upon her i was flabbergasted, she was a short girl not taller than 5'4'' but almost as round. A large double belly stuck out from her frame, her jeans pulled up around the bottom of it causing what appeared a painful muffin top and her shirt did not reach her belt. It threatened to jiggle and dance with every breath and did so every other, it was large and plush and begged to be rubbed, squeezed and played with. Her thighs smashed against each other, rubbing against each other and pushed out far to her flanks. Breasts constrained in a too small brash jiggled up and down as flesh colored jello. Her face was perfectly accentuated by her chubby cheeks and second chin, her eyes held a warmth I hadn't seen or felt in so long.

Over my long life I had been with every type of woman, I had lain above and below skinny, petite, plump, fat, muscular, and combination of all types. I had not slept with a lady so large, one who carried her weight so perfectly, she radiated a aura that made me want to rip our clothes off and lay her down before the coffee house staff and make beautiful passionate sex. At the moment her eyes had gone from sorrowful to angry.

"You know it's not polite to stare!"

"Oh, I'm sorry, I uh" Since my transformation I had never been so stuck, my tongue, unwilling to move, my confidence gone. I returned to the timid man I was so long ago, so unsure and unaware; i almost stopped than and there willing to give up this chance at living and seeing this great experiment. Go back into my hole of endless research, but that is when an evil thought had crossed my mind. I could make her love me, make her realize I'm the only person for her; ramp up her endorphins and pheromones till she doesn't know truth from lies.

I smiled and said "you're right, it's not let me make it up to you". I stood one step from damnation and I decided against it, I would win her heart that night, but not through tricks or deception."I'm James, why don't i buy you a refill than i can apologize for getting lost in your eyes"
She was taken aback for a second and than a grin cross her thick and luscious lips.

We walked away hand in hand to my place and I committed one of my greatest mistakes. Greatest in that it led to love of my life and for the untold misery it would bring down upon those who surrounded her.
>> No. 245
Our hands didn't stay entwined for long. I needed my right hand to hold her leg up, the back of her thigh banging against my stomach as i thrust harder and harder into her sex while my left hand held her belly back and massaged her fupa. Her body became a stormy ocean, the flesh undulating back in forth with the rhythm of our love. Her own hands were quite busy, her left hand clutched at her breast messaging her nipple while her other hand reached out for the chocolates i had purchased on our brief trip home. I had ridden her for two hours straight and her bucking body no longer cried for release and rest, her passions had rose to the highest she'd felt in her entire life. I thrust one last time and stared into her eyes as she into mine.

I realize now these many years later that in all my knowledge and glory i had mistaken the look in her eyes. I had seen lust, desire, and a yearning for my love while something else lingered in there. When I first came upon this realization i had assumed her minority of sins, sloth and gluttony, were her motivations. Now I know, too late, but when she looked back into my eyes she saw something different from any mortal man. She saw her chance at deepest desires locked away; somehow she knew her destiny could be found through me.

With my last thrust I released my boiling passion, my nano enhanced sperm would generate fertilization from any woman. While it had never truly been tested, every simulation I had run had turned out successful. This woman and our future children would insure my placement within the program looking to send families to the stars. Even than i could feel that goal dripping away, my all to mechanical mind putting that goal on the side and thinking more to just living with this woman. I could already feel myself being sucked back into the abyss of pleasure.

I slowly slid her leg down and we both took a deep breath, and while my breathing returned to normal her's remained ragged and short as her body tried to calm itself. I slid in next to her, my right arm slipping down behind her head while my right leg entwined itself with her left. My left hand slid across her belling rubbing and needing her flesh as it saw fit. We stared into each others eyes not needing to say a word. I released into her body a probe of nanites, they would travel through her blood stream improving her general health, increasing her skeletal structure strength and muscle mass. I loved her body and wished to see it not be such a burden upon her soul. The nanites would do there job and than leave her body soon enough. We kissed once more and returned to our long silent stare until a smile reached both our lips I turned out the lights and we kissed once more till she shifted her weight and laid her body across me, engulfing me in sweaty flesh. Blackness than also engulfed me and I slept for the first time in years.

Upon waking I knew something was not right, though in general no physical thing could tell you that. Our bodies remained in our embrace, entwined silently embracing in shared breathing. I didn't need my eyes to know what was a matter, my internal computation machines had informed me upon regaining consciousness. The nanites in my seed had interacted with the nanites in my probe and created their own home colony within my love. Conception had never happened and I had given the gift i kept to myself to another. I released nanite probe swarms into her body to identify further issues. The nano machines had already reached a point of integration that would cause irreversible harm if removed, and I was quite impressed as her internal systems actually began to beat off my scanning probes.; moving quick to protect their new home.

Her eyes shot open as she smelled and heard with a new intensity, she was seeing in spectrums she hadn't known existed, smelling bakeries miles away, tasting the air, and feeling a strength welling within her limbs she had never known. Her body felt feather light as she was being overwhelmed by her new senses until her subconscious wrestled control and naturally shut down her extra senses. She shuddered and looked into my eyes with a combination of fear, anger, and glory.

With a sad smile I calmly stated"Welcome to immortality, or at least the closest thing to it"

She handled it pretty well all things considering. I explained my story glossing over many details, not wanting to shock her beyond a point of repair.

"It's impossible" she stated,"You're saying you developed these scientific advancements back in the time when they couldn't even replace organs with artificial ones"

"Maybe I can do something to prove to you that I'm not lying. Some feat that no ordinary body could withstand." I walked her down to the kitchen at the far side of the house and produced a knife from it's sheath. I took it and cur along my fore arm but no blood pored from grievous wound. Within seconds the wound had healed and within a minute the scar had dissipated before our eyes.

She sat with her mouth open a gasp, until saying "that could be some type of trick, a fake knife and" before i interrupted her with a raised arm.

Nanite streams. flew from my body. Thinner than the smallest wires and too numerous for most to count, the gripped the ceiling above and push against the ground. I began to flat before her like a ghost.

Once again the shock subsided," Can I do any of these things" she asked.

"Not without a lot of practice."

"I'm willing to learn, I've always wanted this to be so much more."

I pulled her from her seat and took her still nude form into my arms "And I have so much to teach you, but why don't i let you do something impossible now instead of later."

With an Eyebrow raised and a smile turning her lips "but what can I do?"

"Eat"

"Honey, I'm not sure if you've forgotten who you're talking to. If there is one thing I can do it's eat" She ran her hands across her ample belly.

"Yes but how much?" he stated slyly "I'm sure you could eat more than most with your little mouth, but now their is no limit to what you can consume."

Her eyes flooded with realization and her tongue darted out to lick her lips "prove it" she uttered in a sultry tone.

We began cooking together, but soon she began to eat, masticate, consume, devour, and destroy all I put before her. As if to try and prove me wrong she pushed herself to her limits trying to find them. Her belly bulged and pushed like never before, growing forth under and above the table. Breast meat was pushed up and to the side as the meals turned to hours and finally i finished the final course.

"See it's not just how much but what you can eat" I set in front of her a fully fried chicken. She began to reach and rip of a leg when i held her hand. I held the chicken in one hand and held open her mouth before shoving it in. She began to resist and choke but I continued despite her protests. As soon as the bird had gotten half way past her lips it's flight truly began and with one quick motion she swallowed the rest.

Her hands slowly ran circles over her stretched belly "I think I may believe you" she said smiling and staring at her gargantuan expanse of naked flesh.
>> No. 246
It has potential but I would recommend more sensuality, less science.
>> No. 252
>>246
I agree. I'm not sure if you get off on nanotechs or if your just trying to explain it.
>> No. 255
>>252
A little bit from column A and a little from column B. Really I just find myself getting lost in the exposition, but I would like it noted that I am the first fetish writer to use the term Fupa.
>> No. 1475
i, for one, think this is awesome. the sci-fi detail is actually a really nice touch.

it makes the bbw aspect seem less forced.
>> No. 1476
Not hard enough to be quality science fiction, not erotic enough to be quality erotica.

Pick one and devote to it and for the other, learn how to be descriptive with an economy of words. It may harsh advice, but focus and being concise with off-topic details are core writing skills.

And yeah, exposition isn't necessarily your friend. Blocks of exposition are useful, but one huge chunk of exposition as a framing device can be so heavy that it unbalances everything that comes after it, making the story directionless. This is especially crucial in anything shorter than a few dozen pages.
>> No. 1483
I think you're also the first fetish writer to use the phrase "my nano enhanced sperm would generate fertilization from any woman", but I'm not entirely sure.
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